Good image but Ste could be a bit bigger so his eyes are nearer the masthead. Needs a couple more features rather than the issue number- this is not info the audience think is important. "This boy" text- line is a bit too long, is cramped on page. Either spread over 2 lines so it's easier to read or shorten the quote e.g "this boy will betray you"
Ste's pose portrays the TOWIE genre well; however maybe add a light grey transparant box behind the name 'Tarquin Jackson' to make it stand out abit more :)
I agree with Kate, his name needs to stand out more and could possibly be more central donut is anchored on him abit more! Could also do with a feature or two as is abit bare xxxx
Good image but Ste could be a bit bigger so his eyes are nearer the masthead. Needs a couple more features rather than the issue number- this is not info the audience think is important. "This boy" text- line is a bit too long, is cramped on page. Either spread over 2 lines so it's easier to read or shorten the quote e.g "this boy will betray you"
ReplyDeleteSte's pose portrays the TOWIE genre well; however maybe add a light grey transparant box behind the name 'Tarquin Jackson' to make it stand out abit more :)
ReplyDeleteI agree with Kate, his name needs to stand out more and could possibly be more central donut is anchored on him abit more! Could also do with a feature or two as is abit bare xxxx
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