This is the first draft of my trailer, after finalising it i realised that i needed to post title cards to keep the audience aware of what was going on and what they were watching in the first place.
I want to change the song to again further the point of the trailer as this song doesn't really fit very well with the trailer and drags on a bit too long.
I want to include other shots like the first half of the phone call towards the end of the trailer, and re-film the scenes that are essential but un-usable.
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