My new edit, still need to improve the editing cuts as they don't really flow as well and some of the shots look too obviously taken in college - I want to re-film the end scene of steph on the other end of the phone call too. But i feel like the shots aren't shaky, the music flows but the mise en scene needs changing.
The shots work really well in the trailer and are not shakey like they previously were. The music works well over the trailer and the voice over at the end is clear and effective. The shot where you are speaking on the phone could maybe be louder though as it is quite hard to hear you
ReplyDeleteshots have been improved and are not steady, the soundtrack fits well with the trailer andis not too loud that we cant hear the dialogue. you also have a good variation of shots.
ReplyDeleteThere is a lot of good camera angles and the music fits well with your edits. Some scenes the dialogue needs to be louder as it is difficult to hear e.g. when you are speaking on the phone. I like the voice over at the end, makes the traier very realistic! Good draft!
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